PlasmaDragon13's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sboyy - Donk this]

The first minute was...bleh

But, Once you hit the one minute mark, it was much better. You need a grasp at keeping things in time with each other. The melody at the beginning wasn't even close to being on time.
When the second melody came in, it was better, but kinda repetitive. And when you had that low bass/piano come in at about 2:48, the higher note was REALLY annoying to listen to.
If it was softer, or lower it woulda been better. But liek before, you got much better after that. Beat was kinda bleh.

I'd give you a 5/10. It was good but there is definetly room for improvement.

Plasma

*Just because I have an ear for music doesn't mean I can make it ;)

sbooy responds:

Thanks man, ahh yeah now that you mention it at 2:48 then synth is kinda annoying,I think I'll just remove that and just let the piano play

Also the melody at the begging was deliberately put off beat(just like it is in the rest of the track) and the fact no other other melody is accompanying it so that would be the reason why it's sounds off time.

[Pokemon Battle (Yo Shee's Mix)]

Yea

Good pokemon remix, but the iron man thing REALLY doesnt fit. I'd fix that.

Im not rating on that tho ;)

Yo-Shee responds:

Right now, I'm definitely leaning towards cutting that out. It was kinda fun the first couple of times I listened to it though. Thanks for your review.

Edit: I made an updated version, editing the ending part. However, I cannot change the file that is currently on here. If you want me to send you the new one, send me a message asking for it.

[ElectroBeat]

Nice Beat

Good start but the tone just isnt right. The melodies/Harmonies dont quite match up. Still a great song, specially once you get past the beggining.

Keep up the good work

7/10
4/10

BinaryGuy responds:

ehh, im not very proud of my older stuff any way. lol
thanks for the review!

[Super Mario World ROCK!]

BEST....MARIO...REMIX.....EVER

Love it. Not much else to say but way to go.... You've heard this from EVRYONE, but make more ;P

5/5 10/10

Soundshifter responds:

thanks man :)

[Overworld Heat]

Wouldn't nessicarily put this in a techno setting.

I'd like to see this in another section, but , as you said, it would be solid for a desert/lava theme.

Keep up the good work, but find the appropriate genre (dont worry i didnt mark you down on that part)

OcarinaMatt responds:

Thanks! ^_^
I put it in Techno because I used a mixer to make it. I guess I'll put it in Video Game, because I had games in mind while making it.

[Set Me Free _ RR]

You did it AGAIN

Man i cannot get enough of your stuff! This is awesome. I can't imagine how you do it this well.

You GOTTA PM me when yer new stuff comes out.

GREAT STUFF MAN!

RenoakRhythm responds:

just time, effort, tutorials, and more time... repeat.

lol... sometimes songs are good sometimes they are not. I have written over a hundred so what you get on NG is like 1 in every 10 songs i make. lol.

Thanks for the review.

[Assertive Mood _ RR]

To arjannl

If you're gonna rate things, why dont you try rating things you like?

The way you're going around, you pick the ones you dont liek and dont give them a chance to be #1, where this song should be, and will always be in my mind.

Dont go around rating 0s because it's not your style. Just dont listen to it.

Renoak you already know my opinion, but ill still give you this

10/10
5/5

Dont listen to all these fools!

RenoakRhythm responds:

lol, thanks for the defense plasmadragon... appreciate it. Sometimes i don't understand people. But everyone's entitled to how they feel though.

And thanks for the reviews again!!! lol, yay.

[Competent Mood _ RR]

Not as good as Assertive, but has a cooler feel.

I personally am an assertive person, and im not hugely thrilled with the original lead for most of the sound, but i must say the ending sounds amazing. Ends kinda abrubtly. I think it definitely is a great song. Keep up the good work.

By the way, what program did you use to create this? It would help me out alot!

RenoakRhythm responds:

I used FL studios 8.

Thanks for checking out ma songs. Ya, its funny how some people like one more than the other, even thought its just such a slight key change... way awesome fun... thanks again, appreciate the review