I agree with heartless
Really annoying base made most of the song bad. Vocals were good and beat was okay...
The first minute was...bleh
But, Once you hit the one minute mark, it was much better. You need a grasp at keeping things in time with each other. The melody at the beginning wasn't even close to being on time.
When the second melody came in, it was better, but kinda repetitive. And when you had that low bass/piano come in at about 2:48, the higher note was REALLY annoying to listen to.
If it was softer, or lower it woulda been better. But liek before, you got much better after that. Beat was kinda bleh.
I'd give you a 5/10. It was good but there is definetly room for improvement.
*Just because I have an ear for music doesn't mean I can make it ;)
Thanks man, ahh yeah now that you mention it at 2:48 then synth is kinda annoying,I think I'll just remove that and just let the piano play
Also the melody at the begging was deliberately put off beat(just like it is in the rest of the track) and the fact no other other melody is accompanying it so that would be the reason why it's sounds off time.
Best pokemon mix I've ever heard. Definetly needs to go into my pokemon games. This also makes me wanna play pokemon again. There are a few points where things just don't match up, but then you throw s'more epic pie at me and I forget all about it! AWESOME MAN!
Keep mixing things up with different variants. Otherwise great. Oh and I will vote :3!
I loved it. Showed such great energy, but at the same time kept the wonder and awe of the original game. It didn't even have a slow start into the song. You don't need any work on this. Keep it up. Could POSSIBLY be a little longer, nut as a loop it is still awesome.
Good pokemon remix, but the iron man thing REALLY doesnt fit. I'd fix that.
Im not rating on that tho ;)
Right now, I'm definitely leaning towards cutting that out. It was kinda fun the first couple of times I listened to it though. Thanks for your review.
Edit: I made an updated version, editing the ending part. However, I cannot change the file that is currently on here. If you want me to send you the new one, send me a message asking for it.
Good start but the tone just isnt right. The melodies/Harmonies dont quite match up. Still a great song, specially once you get past the beggining.
Keep up the good work
ehh, im not very proud of my older stuff any way. lol
thanks for the review!
Good. Very good.
I like it but there may be a little bit too many claps. Make them more of the background. Oh and the little bit in the middle coulda used a little more work
GREAT submission tho!
Love it. Not much else to say but way to go.... You've heard this from EVRYONE, but make more ;P
thanks man :)
Wouldn't nessicarily put this in a techno setting.
I'd like to see this in another section, but , as you said, it would be solid for a desert/lava theme.
Keep up the good work, but find the appropriate genre (dont worry i didnt mark you down on that part)
I put it in Techno because I used a mixer to make it. I guess I'll put it in Video Game, because I had games in mind while making it.
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